昨天幫他印一篇英文作業,心想寫得還不錯,應該由連乘積自己發表,不過他實在太忙了,我順便把他刊登一下,以滿足我的虛榮心,雖然還可以寫得更好,老師也說文法有些問題,不過對於英文不好的我,已經很唬人了~~他是國小5年級



What will the world be like in twenty years later?


 


2022, you can see robots everywhere. Pet robots, working robots, and children robots.


 


2025, robots are very strong. Strong enough to kill ten soldiers in five seconds. Humans are robot’s worker now. Everyone think robots will kill all the humans, but everyone was wrong.


 


Because at the same year, aliens came to America and Africa. Lots of robots get killed. When some people know aliens are good at humans, lots of people swim and fly to America and Africa. But aliens and robots want to kill each other. A fight starts.


 


2027, it’s still fighting. But aliens get stronger and stronger everyday. Now, when you see something outside, there’re only soldiers and weapons, nothing else. Yes, nothing else. All the soldiers from the robots got two guns and ten bombs and one giant cockroach, it big as a horse. That was what the robot’s city will be.


 


But in alien’s city, there’re no soldiers. And everyone was happy. Because aliens put a long and invisible machine round the alien’s city. When robots want to came in, they will all touch the machine. They’ll disappear from the machine, and appear to Pluto. So there’s no big problem in alien’s city.


 


2027 June, the alien are the winner. All the robots are on Pluto. But another danger was coming, and that’s the volcano explode.


 


Next, a very big volcano explodes. None of the aliens had seen it before, humans had seen it before, but they can’t do anything.


 


But very lucky, when the fire and smoke touch the invisible machine, it goes to Pluto. But lots of people and aliens die in fire. The explode finish at next month. Aliens use their cleaning machine to clean their city. And they stay on Earth. What will the world will be like next year? Think by yourself.


這個便是他最擅長的故事式文章,寫故事還不錯,其實方面便得再加強


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